I really liked this plot, SASS man! This is what I love about ModTown: the personalization. My favorite things were the "Dancing Daedra" dinnerware set, the Daedric-themed Beverages, the dances the dancers were dancing (I hadn't seen those since Qarl's Underground! hilarious), the portals which appear as you get close are an awesome touch, and just the dialogue about you and your characters was excellent!
A few discoveries as I played it:
There is
a purple portal to the side when you enter your island realm. Is it supposed to lead somewhere?
Also, for all objects which you add a glow map to, you should make sure that you set the filter mode to
FILTER_TRILERP otherwise it looks pixelated in game like the purple portal above
I didn't actually look at this in the CS to see what settings you had. Is it just my game that the sky is completely white like
this?
Some of your icons for the beverages don't seem to match the bottle. Especially Azura's Wine and the Dremora Draft or whatever that one was called.
The Crystal Torch (which I really like!) has no icon assigned to it
A couple of typos I noticed:
--- In Alistaria's greeting, she says "...welcome to SASS
Islamnd!" --
correct to "Island"--- On your portal sign to Dagon Fel it is spelled "Dagon
Fell" --
correct to "Fel"--- In T'sutfi 's greeting, he says "...and the
comaradrie is warmer!" --
correct to "camaraderie"--- When T'sutfi talks about "Story" he says "a couple of
Altimers" --
correct to "Altmers"